C. A thesis statement, topics, examples and references
Going to a flight school or learning how to fly is not easy and neither cheap. The students should go to a training of at least 40 hours. Although the course or journey of the students is hard, it is satisfying to see them know and develop knowledge and skills in aeronautical field.
<span>The mechanics and organization are good, but sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal style and objective tone.
The sentences in the passage do not have errors in grammar or punctuation, so any of these options can be immediately removed. Ending the first sentence with the word "cool" and using "that's for sure" and "you" in the last sentence, give the passage a much more informal tone. These sentences should be revised for a more formal tone to have a stronger concluding paragraph.
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Answer:
kids copy what they see so if they see voilence then thats how they will act because they think its correct.
