This is what I changed: "Rather than staying at school as you work on a pack provided by your teacher, you have the opportunity to experience the outdoors."
Answer:
They can influence said children into doing good things, and being decent human beings.
If this is for an essay, maybe give examples of athletes helping people out, and being kind
Answer:
1. Astronaut should be brave, determined, adaptable, and smart.
2. The atmosphere should be clean because if it isn't it can cause problems to the environment. Like global warming, it is harming the planet and our weather, etc.
Explanation:
Answer and Explanation:
1. All the verses fit together, because they all keep the theme and thoughts about what it is like to be a "señorita". 2. There are clear transitions between stanzas, which are presented by the thoughts of different family members on a given topic. 4. I would fragment the text by exposing the theme of each stanza in one sentence.
The fragmented text can be seen below
My mother said that my life would change when I turned 15, because I would become a señorita. For my friends, being a señorita is wearing lipstick, but I don't like it. For Mami to be señorita is to wear high-heeled shoes, but I think that is dangerous. For my aunts to be señorita is to wear tailored flowery clothes and pantyhose, but I find it ugly and uncomfortable.
I look in the mirror wearing señorita's clothes and I don't recognize myself, I complain about it and say I don't want to dress like that, but my mother says that señoritas don't talk back to their mothers and let their elders make appropriate decisions.
Being a señorita, for my father means that he has to deprive me of having boyfriends, but that's okay, because I have no interest in boyfriends but in studying and getting a university degree. For my sisters, being a señorita means having someone to worship, but for me, being a señorita means being unhappy and giving up fun things, it is to live a boring life, it is to celebrate contently without happiness, but with posture and dignity. To be señorita is to be the girl that I was, but without a voice.