The best revision of the statement "Children seem to like me, and I don't mind hanging out with them. It's pretty easy to keep them amused" is:
Children seem to like me, and it's pretty easy to work with them.
<em>This revision deletes the phrase "I don't mind hanging out with them", that phrase is not really necessary since it was already stated that children liked the person. It is logical that the person doesn't mind hanging out with someone who likes him/her. Also, the phrase "it's pretty easy to keep them amused" suggests that working with them is easy. At the end of the day, the key to work with children is being able to keep them amused, in other words, getting and keeping their attention. </em>
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Am I the only person that is here just for the points? But I dont get the question, confused
Among many, the excerpt that best exhibits the most informal style written by Serena Lawrence is the following one: "I am currently a 10th-grade student at Oak Brook High School, where I am studying all kinds of neat things”. And there is another excerpt where she provides the following information: "Previously, I volunteered at the Kitty Kat Rescue, where I gave water and food to the cats, cleaned their cages, and spent time playing with them." The reason behind this and the future plans of Serena are clear: she wants to study biology at Oak Brook Community College.
