Question

Please help me with my English essay .....my topic is about the moment I laughed until I cried

Answer 1

Answer:

I know this is not what you are looking for but I can give an example of an essay if you would like!  Would you like me to give you an essay I wrote so you can follow how I structured it?

Explanation:

First you need a hook! AKA "Thesis"

Next you need to create the body. Which are paragraphs that support your thesis.

The very last paragraph should be your concluding paragraph.

If you don't know what these words mean let me know I can help more and share an essay I wrote to help! Have a wonderful day and good luck! :))

This is an essay that was wrote by me and one of my friends and I copied and pasted so if you see some of the same lines ignore it lol.

What does your identity say about you? Do you know your identity? Writing this essay helped me understand more about my identity. This essay is about my identity from the past, present,and future. First, I want to talk about my past. What does your identity say about you? Do you know your identity? Writing this essay helped me understand more about my identity. This essay is about my identity from the past, present, and future. First, I want to talk about my past.“What have I gone through in my past that has helped shape my identity?” Something that can affect our identity is where and who we lived with when we were kids. As kids we watched all the adults around us and copied them. It helped us learn. Even if when we copied them it was not a good thing how are we supposed to know? Everything I have done or that has happened to me in my personal past has made me who I am today. I remember watching my grandma and papa. I learned to walk a little early because of them. I touched everything to see what it was. Hearing my grandma and papa talk helped me learn english. Listening to music helped me understand it more. Eating food helps me understand what I like and don’t like. I think who I am today is a much better version of me than the past me. I have learned and grown over the years ever since I moved in with my grandma. This makes sense because this is all what I went through in the past that shaped who I am today. Everything that has happened in my past or early years shaped me and helped me learn. Now I know what I did wrong and what I did right. I express my identity by my love for singing. Some of our famous singers influenced me.  In the future I want to identify as an actress and possibly a musician too! In these careers I hope I have the chance to travel as well! I don’t want to be identified as a “Rich famous celebrity.” I am, and will be so much more than that. I want to be treated as a normal person. Even if I don’t get as known, or a celebrity. I will still be happy because I am doing