I'd choose "revise the structure of your essay by making the progression more logical."
Out of all the given answers that one makes most sense
A narrator can write from different points of view, mainly first person or third person. Choosing the point of view is a big deal for an author, because the perspective from which a novel is narrated has a big impact on a reader's experience.
Answer:
D.
Explanation:
The fact that it has the word "extraneous" in it should be enough to prove my point. In no situation should an essay be difficult to read or understand, given that the point of an essay is to educate.