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nataly862011 [7]
2 years ago
5

Which sentence from the passage needs revision because it is too wordy or redundant?

English
1 answer:
Nastasia [14]2 years ago
8 0

Answer:

d

Explanation:

my answer but if you want correct answer search it on or read it to your notes.thanks

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