MARKING BRAINLIEST: QUESTION ABOUT DIALOGUE: Ok so I'm writing a memoir about personal growth for my AP Lang class and I need to
know if the dialogue/ punctuation is good. If not, please include what I should change to fix it. DIALOGUE:
“No No No,” I say to Khalil as I watch him trying to read out loud a sentence from a book his school sent him. “You have to pay attention to what I said. Now, what does this sentence say?” Khalil looks back at the book and says, “Jason’s mom loves how he shares his toys with his sister Jessie.” “See, I told you it’s easy!” I say. It’s been several weeks since that dreadful day, and things have slowly gotten better. I started trying my hardest to help out around the house, from teaching my younger brother to read, taking care of the baby so my parents can work, and making life for everyone as easy as possible. This continued every day, and I eventually began to feel as if I was a different person.
I think its good but you need a better transition before your last piece of dialogue and the following sentence. Its very quick to move on, so they adding context into why that day was ap dreadful. hope this helps!
If u go for a run early in the morning then you might have eaten a sandwich for dinner last night. If you forget about last night then you might consider taking a light breakfast before thinking when to schedule your run. In any case, givrn the data presented above, one shoudn't eat more then two sanwiches a day when combined with energy drinks like orange juice
I would say use of commercially produced fertilizer plus increase of diversity of crops would be the main two advances made after the Industrial Revolution in agriculture.Commercially produced fertilizers would make them much more available to most farmers and allow them to make up for deficiencies in thop eir soil and crop diversity could perhaps allow them to grow different things in different seasons or have several different crops at the same time.
