Question

MARKING BRAINLIEST: QUESTION ABOUT DIALOGUE: Ok so I'm writing a memoir about personal growth for my AP Lang class and I need to know if the dialogue/ punctuation is good. If not, please include what I should change to fix it.
DIALOGUE:
“No No No,” I say to Khalil as I watch him trying to read out loud a sentence from a book his school sent him. “You have to pay attention to what I said. Now, what does this sentence say?” Khalil looks back at the book and says, “Jason’s mom loves how he shares his toys with his sister Jessie.” “See, I told you it’s easy!” I say. It’s been several weeks since that dreadful day, and things have slowly gotten better. I started trying my hardest to help out around the house, from teaching my younger brother to read, taking care of the baby so my parents can work, and making life for everyone as easy as possible. This continued every day, and I eventually began to feel as if I was a different person.

Answer 1

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the punctuation is great and so is the dialogue!!

Answer 2

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I think its good but you need a better transition before your last piece of dialogue and the following sentence. Its very quick to move on, so they adding context into why that day was ap dreadful. hope this helps!