Don't use the link the other person sent. Here's an answer i can give you, i can't draw but i can write:
You can draw trees with classical purple trunks and crimson red leaves that have scales on them like fish scales. You can name i these trees "Sematoils"
The non-harmful bees that live in some trees with their hives can be colored in a blue color and named "Donitels"
The birds can be colored in black and light blue with an odd alien-like design (contorted wings, odd beaks, weird legs, etc.). They can be named "Parofalas".
Leslie Marmon Silke is the old man who is found dead under the big cottonwood tree.
The quality is good.
No passive voice.
In the beginning, it all began with Ralph Baer in 1967 in Nashua, NH. In 1966, while working for Sanders Associates Inc., engineer Ralph Baer began to investigate how to play games on TV. (add examples of investigations, don't add too much cuz it is gonna get too wordy)And as a result of his investigations Brown Box was created. According to the G-Phoria Legend Award, “Baer is considered "the Father of Video Games due to his many contributions to games and helping to spark the video game industry in the latter half of the 20th century”. Little did we know this great invention would be in everyone's life today.
I would say you should tell the reader some of the investigations he made, possibly some examples.
