1answer.
Ask question
Login Signup
Ask question
All categories
  • English
  • Mathematics
  • Social Studies
  • Business
  • History
  • Health
  • Geography
  • Biology
  • Physics
  • Chemistry
  • Computers and Technology
  • Arts
  • World Languages
  • Spanish
  • French
  • German
  • Advanced Placement (AP)
  • SAT
  • Medicine
  • Law
  • Engineering
Dvinal [7]
3 years ago
14

Please help i have posted this question 3 times' and no one ahs answered it please 30 points please help I really don't understa

nd can you please revise my paragraph and make it have no passive voice and change the Syntax (sentence structure).
In the beginning, it all began with Ralph Baer in 1967 in Nashua, NH. In 1966, while working for Sanders Associates Inc., engineer Ralph Baer began to investigate how to play games on TV. And as a result of his investigations Brown Box was created. According to the G-Phoria Legend Award, “Baer is considered "the Father of Video Games due to his many contributions to games and helping to spark the video game industry in the latter half of the 20th century”. Little did we know this great invention would be in everyone's life today.

4/5 Coherence
5/15 Syntax (sentence structure) - highlight the changes made to the syntax
5/10 Voice (no passive voice) - highlight the changes made to the voice 5/15 Reflection Paragraph --Describe the specific revisions you made regarding SYNTAX and VOICE to demonstrate your understanding of those concepts. Explain how your changes improved the paragraph.
English
1 answer:
rusak2 [61]3 years ago
3 0

The quality is good.

No passive voice.

In the beginning, it all began with Ralph Baer in 1967 in Nashua, NH. In 1966, while working for Sanders Associates Inc., engineer Ralph Baer began to investigate how to play games on TV. (add examples of investigations, don't add too much cuz it is gonna get too wordy)And as a result of his investigations Brown Box was created. According to the G-Phoria Legend Award, “Baer is considered "the Father of Video Games due to his many contributions to games and helping to spark the video game industry in the latter half of the 20th century”. Little did we know this great invention would be in everyone's life today.

I would say you should tell the reader some of the investigations he made, possibly some examples.

You might be interested in
Lisr at least three reason why that right is central to daily life of an american
inysia [295]
Turning right on a signal if it says you can right turn
Typing, need to know which hand is right
Use your right hand to type
6 0
3 years ago
Which is the best description
telo118 [61]

Answer:

C is the answer

Explanation:

5 0
3 years ago
Which of the following is a compound sentence?
Harman [31]
The compound sentence would be choice A. Erin and Maria are going to the mall, and John is going to the movies. Hope this helps! ^_^
6 0
3 years ago
Which of the following would be most representative of the style of writing found in Western literature at the beginning of the
AURORKA [14]
C. <span>". . . the man raised his eyes to the horizon and laughed . . ."</span>
4 0
3 years ago
Read 2 more answers
What assumption does the writer of an allusion make about the reader? A. That the reader does not have the background knowledge
trasher [3.6K]

Answer:

D. That the reader has the background knowledge to understand the allusion

Explanation:

If there is an allusion to Venus the goddess of beauty, the counterpart of Aphrodite(Greek Mythology), someone who does not have any background knowledge about Roman mythology or mythology in general would assume the writer is referring to Venus, the planet rather than the goddess.

In order to understand an allusion as used by a writer, the reader must have adequate knowledge as this was expected of the reader by the writer.

4 0
3 years ago
Other questions:
  • What is the meaning of the word interred in line 4 of this speech?
    13·1 answer
  • Which word in the sentence is the action verb?
    7·1 answer
  • And how it feels to be colored me what does the following passage from the text mainly reveal about the narrator in paragraph 8
    8·2 answers
  • PLZ ANSWER Many literary scholars have claimed that was a pseudonym for Charles L. Dodgson.
    7·1 answer
  • HURRY 10 MIN LEFT
    13·1 answer
  • Which sentence is an example of faulty coordination?
    13·1 answer
  • Which version of sentence 15 (reproduced below) most effectively maintains the style and tone of the writer's argument in
    6·2 answers
  • What heading would you put the following excerpt under?
    5·1 answer
  • What is the best way to describe the diction of the
    6·1 answer
  • Jill is giving a presentation about how Cesar Chavez led a movement to create a farm workers union in California. Which sentence
    11·2 answers
Add answer
Login
Not registered? Fast signup
Signup
Login Signup
Ask question!