The sentence has been rewritten in correct parallelism below:
- Children need to be loved, nurtured, provided for, and disciplined.
Parallelism is a style of writing in which words follow a particular pattern that lends rhythm and balance to the text. The way in which certain parts of the text are constructed is similar.
In the above sentence, the addition of the phrase, 'should be,' altered the correct pattern that the sentence had at the outset.
To balance the pattern and rhythm of the sentence, the past participles of the verbs should be maintained. Thus, the revised sentence is the above in bullet point.
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Answer:
The stems are covered with tough skin, and is covered with wax. The think waxy skin down loss of water. The leaves of cacti are sharp spines(thorns). Many animals want the water inside the cactus, but the sharp spines and thick shin protects the cactus.
They just want to play the go dam game
