Question

Read the following paragraphs. Decide if each has unity. If a paragraph does not have unity, write the sentence or sentences that do not belong.
1. A recording studio does not always make a lot of money by making a recorded. When a record is purchased, only about ten percent of the price goes to the artist. The artist must split that money with managers, producers, arrangers, and any backup musicians. Barry Manilow was once a backup musician for Bette Midler. Nevertheless, because this is a period in history when an album can easily sell ten million copies, huge profits are possible.

2. There are many kinds of microphones used in radio broadcasting today. There are microphones that pickup all the sounds in an area, and others that absorb only the sound of the announcers voice. There are also microphones for interviews, and remote microphones for news reports. Many people rely on the radio for daily news updates.

3. Mimes are trained in the art of portraying characters through movement. They use a combination of acting and dancing, by they never speak any lines. They work without props and in simple costumes. Mimes tell stories that can be understood by anyone from any country because these artists speak through body and facial expressions rather than words. ​

Answer 1

I think For #1 the first and 4th sentence do not belong. They are just extra that don’t need to be there