In the climax, usually the most tense situation in the conflict is introduced. After the climax follows with the falling action. For example a murder mystery's climax is maybe catching the murderer or the time the murder takes place. Hope this helps!
You can revise your claim to make it sound more original or specific by changing the hook to a very different but still effective one, you should have different types of redirect to stand out
Panic would give you extreme fear to the point where you're frozen.
John and Abigail had an affair.
after several months Abigail is still in love with John, but John does not feel the same way he even said he would rather cut off his hand than to touch her. He clearly has no feelings for Abigail when Abigail goes as far as to accuse Johns wife of witchcraft in hope that she can replace his wife.
