Answer:
Try to be more descriptive. Change "deeper and deeper" to "The sun began to slowly sink further into the horizon as the night creeping"
Explanation:
I think that the overall idea of the description is good but I just feel like, maybe it could be worse more where you get a better sense of how it might look. kind of giving it that fancy but also story like touch to it to make it seem both real but that of a description coming from a detailed memory.
Answer:
Although there is a slight misunderstanding of the text in the first sentence of the first body paragraph (Nana impacts the story's plot because she had the farm, that the main character went to during the summer and saw the monarchs migrate), this is a misconstruing of an implicit idea in the text and does not ...
Explanation:
There is two reasons. This is what I think but I don't know if it's true. It's probably because the fence is too old and weak or the geese probably helped him climb out. I really need to re-read Charllote's Web again to figure out that part. But I think reason 1 makes more sense though. Hope I helped.
Here is an email you could write to your friend about this topic:
Hey, I've noticed you've been trying to get into this school for a while and I just wanted you to know a few things so you're not lost like I was the first day. First of all, this school offers so much in terms of extra curiculars. I myself am doing computer design and beginers HMTL, but they offer lots of thing that I think you'd like. I know you're a fan of sports which is cool because some of the facilities they offer are Soccer, Basketball, Badminton and there are a couple more, but I don't think you'd really be interested in it.
when writing an Email to your friend, you can use shortened language and personalized words that you otherwise wouldn't on a formal email. One of those words I used was "hey"
You can also personalize your email to that specific person, which I showed buy saying "and there are a couple more, but I don't think you'd really be interested in it."