Maya likes to swim in the ocean rather than swimming inside the pool
How do you think Kamal Harris will be as the new vice president of the us, what kind of impact will she make?
The troposphere is the lowest level of the atmosphere, so it is in contact with the Earth's surface. In contrast, the stratosphere is located above the troposphere, so it is not in contact with the Earth's surface. ... The air density and air pressure are much lower in the stratosphere.
I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay.
That is the answer. :)
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