The grammatical and stylistic errors are
- Pennsylvania was governed by a member of the Penn family until the beginning of the Revolutionary War. -Passive voice
- The colony remained committed to William Penn's ideals for this span of so very many, long years. -Wordiness
- As governor of the colony, the first constitution was written by Penn and called for an elected legislature. -Subject-verb agreement error
- Penn's Christian values extended to the Native Americans, he paid them for the land and refused to exploit them. -Comma splice
- A Quaker, Penn sort of hoped Pennsylvania would be a haven for his fellow Quakers who faced continual persecution in England. -Informal word
- William Penn valued religious freedom and self-government, he established the colony of Pennsylvania in 1682 as a welcoming land for others with similar values. Pronoun-antecedent agreement.
Several grammatical and stylistic blunders occurred in the sentences above. Wordiness occurred when several words that would have been substituted for just one were used. Subject-verb agreement error happened when the verb did not correlate with the subject in the sentence.
'Sort of hoped' is an informal phrase. Passive voice occurs when the subject received the action of the verb. Pronoun-antecedent agreement error is the absence of a symbiotic relationship between the pronoun and the phrases that come after it.
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From the beginning this passage talked about Faizula
doing things for other people, not really looking for anything in return. He didn’t
want to bother the person behind him by leaning his seat back, let other people
go ahead even though he didn’t really want to. For a while it didn’t seem like
he would catch a break but when he was nice to the guy selling roses, and he
saw how it impacted him, all his niceness payed off.
I think the roses in the story represent the beauty
that can come out of one kind act. It sounds cheesy but, in the story, it talked
about how Faizula felt good about giving the man a smile and extra money, even
though the whole day he was being kind to no avail. The man was trying to sell
the roses to many people but each one shot him down, then when Faizula changed
his mind and bought one it changed the man’s whole mood, and in a way gave him
hope.
Faiula’s culture influences the story by creating a
sort of guideline we know he must follow. Not only should one be always kind
but self-disciplinary. He showed self-discipline when he didn’t break his fast
and chose to focus on his work. Through out the story he was consistent with
his actions and thoughts and that emphasizes how good of a person he really is.
I would say that your answer would be D, as various hardships are mentioned when they said they tried to be peaceful.
