There are slight grammatical errors and a bit of poor structuring, here's a better revised edition:
The unidentified male protagonist in Edgar Allen Poe's "The Pit and the Pendulum" is a victim of the Spanish Inquisition. Throughout the story, he wishes for death, but his fate always seems hopeful.
If it already has the souce before it like for example it says " According to blank "Evidence" You still have to put the parentheses even though it is still there.
I believe that the thesis of base in growing up you become wiser because of your experiences with the world and the advice you take from people and that each experience, whether good or bad, helps us to be stronger and better.