<span>She tries to manipulate new yearbook club members into doing her work.
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She is drafting someone to take pictures as a volunteer when that very well could simply be part of her own job.
The plain is being compared to a Leonard's tawny hide
I think the correct answer from the choices listed above is option C. The best revision that removes the informal language from the passage would be to change only sentence 2 to "This class has given me the opportunity to build skills such as answering phones professionally and using spreadsheets and databases."