There was a man who went to the grocery store to buy some food. he went into the store, got what he needed, went through the checkout line, paid for his things, and left. When he got home, as he was unpacking the groceries, he realized he didn't have his wallet, but he had to have had it at the store because he paid for all of the food. He rushed back to the store and ran back to ask the cashier that checked him out if she found his wallet. He had left it sitting right in front of her, and when she went to return it, he had already left. They were both very happy. The cashier because she was able to return the man's wallet to him, and the man because he had found his lost wallet.
No, there is no credible evidence that the death penalty deters crime more effectively than long terms of imprisonment. States that have death penalty laws do not have lower crime rates or murder rates than states without such laws.
She hopes her daughter is a "fool" because she doesn't want her daughter to know that she deserves better than what the world will give to her. Men are seen above women so the best thing a woman can be is beautiful because her husband will treat her better than if she were viewed as ugly. Being beautiful would also help her to get a husband in a better wealth class. Daisy knows how cruel the world can be towards women
Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest. Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.