The sentences that are punctuated correctly are listed below.
- My science teacher, who is new to my school, is encouraging me to enter the science fair.
- The roses that I planted in my garden have not yet bloomed.
The other sentences should be written differently.
My friend Ray, a figure skater, would like to learn to play chess.
- We need the commas to separate the additional, irrelevant information.
Javier made a sculpture out of seashells that he found on the beach.
- The comma is not necessary.
The winning dog, which is a collie, completed the course in only twelve seconds.
- We need the commas to separate the additional, irrelevant information.
First write a claim, simply just restate the question
Second write 3 things that you liked or did not like about the book
Third write down a conclusion
now write down a new paragraph starting with your claim and explaining more
about why you didn't or did like the book
Now write down your 3rd paragraph which is the conclusion simply write down you thesis statement and write down your claim in past like.
