I watched as my wife passed by, taking deep breathes from a cigarette. I saw every fine detailed about her, her long curvy legs, her hair so perfectly tied back. I saw her black dress, silk and smooth that the light glister off it. I saw the pearl necklace around her neck, the one I bought her. I saw the beautiful face of the heavens, oh how she took every ounce of my breathe away. I smiled at her, she kindly returned back. For a moment, the world stood still. But it went back to my normal life, and the women I saw was just words I wrote on a piece of paper.
-WarriorConcerto
the elements of formal writing style are
- diction (otherwise known as word choice)
- sentence structure and syntax
- nature of figurative language
- rhythm and component sounds
- rhetorical patterns
- using the active voice
- literal and concrete language
- concision (otherwise known as eliminating redundancy)
Answer:
1. [The frog ate many insects when the terrarium was warm, but when][the terrarium was cold, it ate fewer of them.]
2. [The insects might have lived longer if][they were given more space in the terrarium]
3. [The insects that were fed more grew larger, while][the ones that were fed less remained small]
I don't know this one! I'm sorry
