If you want to know whether that sentence is punctuated correctly, then you are right - it is.
You need to have a comma after the word range, because that is where the dependent clause ends, and there should be no comma before the conjunction and.
Answer:
Firstly, I can see what appears to be a large reptile, probably a snake, wrapped around a Zoo tour bus. The location is in a city, where no people are seen. Some large building are seen in the back. There are 2 trees, and the tree nearest to the middle is shaped like an upside down T.
I think it is D - supporting detail, just a guess tho
I am so sorry right now I can't think of anything however I can give you tips to writing one!!!! When you write a really short story the easiest way in my option is to add semi-colons. Also, make sure to include a who, what, when, where, and how in each sentence to make the story contain more information. Also if you want you can end in a cliff-hanger which makes you be able to not write as much. Your teacher is probably looking for you to have a conflict so make sure to include a problem in your story!!! I really hope this helps!!! Good luck I am sure you story will end up being AWESOME!!!! :)
