The sentence had repetitive words replaced with synonyms and pronouns. "but my father disliked..." is too much alike to "my father disliked" so it would get tedious and harder to read.
They replaced it with "but he hated ... " to get some variation.
I haven't seen anything but cowardice and expediency.
Well i don't think anyone understood your question.
“I believe a longer spring break will help students perform better in school. After a week away from their studies, students will be refreshed and able to concentrate until the end of the school year”
This states your stance and reasoning.
