I really need points so i don’t know if this is right but I did some research and supernatural aid often provides a hero with a talisman or boon that will help them on their quest
Here are my suggestions on what you should edit:
Should cigarettes be illegal? Smoking can cause lung cancer, strokes, and many other diseases. Diseases caused from smoking are one of the most preventable in the US. In the States, more than 480,000 deaths occur a year due to smoking related illnesses. Smoking should be made illegal to protect our health.
I changed it up because you need more variety in your diction (wording), and also the phrasing could be slightly improved. When you wrote "In the US, more than 480,000 deaths occur a year due to cigarettes" the phrasing didn't make much sense. You don't die from a cigarette. You die from diseases that are caused from regular smoking.
Hope this helped!
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He lures him to his death with the promise of wine. Montresor is lured into a cellar thinking he'll be enjoying wine, but he is murdered instead. Montresor is motivated by his desire to drink wine.
The person who wrote this thinks that their offer on the amendments will be rejected unfairly by the assembly without even putting up a debate/fight.
