Question

So I am writing a film review for my homework, And I have to use techniques like AFOREST. I wrote a film review and tell me if it using great grammar and stuff. tell me something I should add. THANKS
INEQUALITY RACISM AND INJUSTICE are the points that are shown in the film.The Hate you Give was published February 17th 2018, written by Angie Thomas. Winning a total of 5 awards, and a 4.5 out of 5 by Goodreads and a 5/5 on Common Sense Media. The book follows Starr Carter, a Young African American woman struggling with the very real situation of police brutality. This is one of those stories that will really stick with you, because most of the time you hear these stories and all you do is just be glad it’s not you. But this story takes a very interesting approach to these police brutality incidents.

The story begins with Starr Carter attending the usual spring break party when her friend Khalili Who comes and talks to her.Then a gun fire breaks out at the party and Khalil brings her home. As they are driving down the road listening to Tupac they get pulled over. As Khalil is ripped out of the car by 115 ( the police officer's badge number). Starr can just watch as her friend gets shot multiple times in the back.

This movie is a must watch movie and would be recommended for all people of all ages and all races.You don't realize what little things you do until it's a big thing that you can't change or take back. This movie is so inspiring for humans to watch to do better, humans need to take more responsibility for their actions and actually realize what their simple actions actually lead to and how to affect others and just not yourself. Everytime rewatch this movie I learn something new.

It was a great movie! Even though some other people disagree because they thought that it was ok for the Officer to shoot him because he grabbed something out of the car and the officer got scared “ but would he have shot him if he was white ? “ The same question Starr asked too. The film showed how till this day people of color are still being discriminated against by their race not who they are as a person but their color. THIS FILM WILL FILL YOUR HEART WITH EMOTION! and heartbreaking events. The Hate You Give has a direct message to show you,you must watch and see what it is.You see stuff like this happen and you don't realize it is affecting the people who are experiencing it until you watch the movie and fully understand what they are going through.

Answer 1

You did very well writing this but I made quite a few edits so I'll just type my version for references.

Explanation:

Inequality, racism, and injustice are the main points shown in this film. The Hate You Give was published on February 17 of 2018, and was written by Angie Thomas. This film has won a total of 5 awards, a 4.5/5 by Goodreads, and a 5/5 on Common Sense Media. The book follows Starr Carter, a young African American woman whom is struggling with the very real situation of police brutality. People often sit idoly by in silence when things like in this story happen, but I can assure that from my own reading and viewing experiences that this will stick with you.

The story begins with Starr Carter attending the annual spring break party. Just as her and her friend Khalil are talking a shooting breaks out and Khalil flees with Starr. As they're driving away they get pulled over. An officer of the badge number 115 rips Khalil from the car. Starr then witnesses her friends murder as Khalil is shot multiple times in the back.

I personally believe that this movie should be watched by countless people no matter their race or background. It truly brings attention to the discrimination against people of color. Us as people choose our decisions, and with every decision comes and affect. It's up to your cause, your decision, whether or not that affect is positive or negative.

The Hate You Give is a totally worth it film. I believe it can and will change people's perspectives.