Revision involves clarifying purpose and meaning.
All other choices would be incorrect because they are a part of the process of editing.
I believe the answer is D
Answer:
you need to add some commas and you need to add "the" in front of reader
The second sentence doesn't make sense.
Explanation:
I would suggest using Grammarly and proof reading your work at least 3 times out loud.
The best time to determine voice & tone in writing is when you are in the beginning/middle of the passage/book/article because you will see what the author is going to talk about and then how he feels about it.
Answer:
Solomon was apparently influenced by God's prophecy to him that his kingdom would be divided due to his idolatrous practices and that the ten northern tribes would be given to his servant (echoed by the word from God through the prophet Ahijah to Solomon's servant Jereboam), and he sought to kill Jeroboam, who fled to ..
