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Can everyone please check if the punctuation, capital letters, and like spelling.. and everything is correct? Btw this is an expository paragraph on introducing a person.

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Do you ever desire to feel the wind crashing against your skin and see flashes of shapes and colours as you plummet down a hill on a bike so fast that you could maybe rival a cheetah? If so, then Joann the multi-talented wizard, is your pal. An Indian immigrant to Canada with the love of riding bikes at a wicked speed during the summer other than seeing her at your local park you could also stumble upon her slouching on her couch and watching her favourite Malayalam movie take off.

Or at home, Joann could be found with her two younger sisters smelling the delicious waft of her favourite world-renowned Indian dish biryani, with its long-grained rice, flavourful spices, layered with chicken and its thick gravy, anyone can be found hungry! Not only that she loves to read books, with a wide range of genres, from fantasy to historical fiction, and she also admits that she can never stop re-reading her favourite book, Refugee by Alan Gratz.

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