No. It should be "Paloma did not make it to work, for her car broke down on the freeway".
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When I was in sixth grade I was one a sea saw and went flying forward on it and cut my head above my eye on the edge and had to get stitches
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Blake describes wandering 'thro' each charter'd street'. ... In Blake's 'London' even the beauty and anarchy of nature are subjected to political control. The regular iambic rhythm continually exemplifies the unavoidable, imprisoning influence of society, which haunts not only nature, but the citizens of London.
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This sentence is messy, as well as a run-on. Here's a revised version:
"It becomes easy to gossip among the office, but remember; it is just as easy to keep it a secret!"
There is proper punctuation added to make it easier to read. It also adds personality and emotion to the sentence. Try reading the two aloud and compare them. You can make changes to it if you feel it necessary.
Since astute means someone is very sharp and perceptive, I would say astute has a positive connotation.
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