I think it’s D but I need to make sure
Answer:
Paragraph rewritten with consistency: " In the story, "The Valiant Woman" by J. J. Powers, we find that in judging people we overlook most of the characteristics that draw us to him (them), but we do so without realizing it. You (we) can draw inaccurate conclusions about a person by misjudging their facial expressions, their physical stamina, and their obvious personality traits. When people (we) are blinded by false superiority, they (we) judge a person incorrectly because they (we) fail to see them as they really are."
Explanation:
To generate consistency in the above passage, you must keep the message linked to a single narrative, keeping pronouns fixed to something or someone. For this it is necessary that you when speaking with readers always use the pronouns "we", "us", while, when referring to the people being judged, always use the pronouns "they" and "them". In this way the passage will show consistency, as shown above.
Answer:
<em>Changes made: Passive voice, capitalization, comma splice, missing determiner, and punctuation. Please compare.</em>
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Nelle Harper Lee, better known as Harper Lee, is an American author who wrote its sequel. She was born on April 28, 1926, in Monroeville, Alabama, U.S. Lee attended the University of Alabama but left without earning her degree. She moved to New York City afterward and had been working as an airline reservationist. In addition, some of Lee's friends helped her financially for her to write full-time. As a result, she was able to construct her famous novel, which was based on an unsuccessful trial of two African American men who were falsely accused of murdering a white woman. It sold over 30 million copies worldwide and was made into a film in 1992. Harper Lee's worth was estimated at $35 million, but she did not have a lavish lifestyle; in fact, she donated much of her fortune to charities. In conclusion, Nelle Harper Lee wrote two of the most influential books which taught people about racial justice and open-mindedness.
