Answer:
Hi, I'm new can I get marked as brainlieser? It would be highly appreciated.
Hope my answer helps :)
lets get into answering your question.
it is actually GREAT
Explanation:
just some notes:
- make sure to choose more sophicated words {this will help you get higher grades}
- Make sure your paragraphs are in the correct order
- Are your information correct {always ask this question, because you dont want to provide wrong info, but here it seems your info are correct for the most part.
