The most crucial to a reader's understanding of an expository text would be how effective the text is written to convey a clear and concise idea to the reader. It should be able to penetrate a reader's comprehension well and establish a clear way to get the point across.
<span><span>"he heard the slap of the window curtains
against the wall and the sound of paper fluttering from his desk,
and he had to push to close the door." quoted from the book</span></span>
Not bad, i'd say. just make sure you add transitional words/phrases so that it all makes sense, okay? other than that, i really love it, great job!
also, it does include logos, pathos, and ethos.
Rupert Chawner Brooke 3 August 1887 – 23 April 1915 was an English poet known for his idealistic war sonnets written during the First World War, especially "The Soldier". He was also known for his boyish good looks, which were said to have prompted the Irish poet W. B. Yeats to describe him as "the handsomest young man in England"
Answer: 1914 V: The Soldier