Question

What's another way you can rephrase this so that it makes more sense? what can you say instead of pale and dark and winter night?
Face as pale as a cold and dark winter night

Answer 1

Answer:

A face as white as a cold, unlit night in December.

Explanation:

I hope this helps!

Answer 2

Answer:

our faces were ghostly pale that cold dark winter's night

Explanation: this is kinda my thing ;)