Which revision makes the tone of the sentence appropriate for a formal e-mail?

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"Please review our suggestion for paving over the muddy area where students wait before school" is the one revision among the following choices given in the question that <span>makes the tone of the sentence appropriate for a formal e-mail. The correct option among all the options that are given in the question is option "A". </span>

N76 [4]3 years ago

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A)Please review our suggestion for paving over the muddy area where students wait before school.

Option A has the correct revision for a formal email. It states the topic without using any informal tone or voice. Option B is informal because of the introductory phrase "you now" and the vagueness of the observation "it's gross." Option C is informal due to the words "awesome" and "gross". Option D is informal because of the use of the word "obviously" and "smart".

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