To convince or persuade the reader to never give up
Answer: Done is the only verb that makes sense. He “done” the assignment yet?
Explanation: The other verbs of do are: do, does, doing, did, done.
OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
FEEDBACK/"FIXES":
<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
Okay I have to go now but I hope what I provided helps.
What you described here is a metaphor. She is not really a shell burned out by one fierce moment of fire, she is Emily, a human being, however, a metaphor is used to make emphasize the statement and make it more poetic.
B because To produce something for information without Bubba blah blah blah