Answer:
Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
Subjective mood is used to express wishes, desires, and doubts and unknown or factual situations.
For this question you would tick off the first and last box.
Hope that helps. -UF aka Nadia
Answer:
1. How can everything come from nothing when nothing is something that has nothing to do with anything?
2. Is everything nothing or nothing is everything?
3. Why nothing is nothing and everything is everything?
4. What if nothing is anything and everything is not everything?
5. What will you do when you do nothing?
6. Why am I so mad and asking all the questions that make no sense and makes sense to those only who have common sense?
7. Why do fish don’t get cold even after living their entire life in water?
8. How can “makes sense” make sense and “nonsense” make no sense?
9. If the Big Bang happened 14 billion years ago, when did the small bang happen?
10. If I am breathing while I'm sleeping, does that mean I will live after death?
Your answer is no.
Four types of text structures are:
Cause and Effect, Comparison/Contrast, Order/Sequence, Chronological Sequence.
Lets explain in brief form:
Cause and Effect: This structure presents the causal relationship between an specific event, idea, or concept and the events, ideas, or concept that follow.
Comparison/Contrast: This type of text examines the similarities and differences between two or more people, events, concepts, ideas, etc.
Order/Sequence: This text structure gives readers a chronological of events or a list of steps in a procedure.
Chronological Sequence: Problem-Solution This type of structure sets up a problem or problems, explains the solution, and then discusses the effects of the solution.
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It should be a simile because the word 'like' is there.
Hope this helps!