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marusya05 [52]
3 years ago
6

I need help editing this paragraph or someone please make it sound better

English
1 answer:
Pepsi [2]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

Explanation:

Instead of “he got killed” say he got “ unnecessarily murdered.”

Everything else is great!

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