The first one, "was revealed" makes it passive,
Johnny Cade is so nervous and scared all the time because he doesn't know when a socs will come up and shank him with a blade because he is at the point of his lis he isn't sure if he should die.if where he doesn't want to die but he wants to kill him self or die
Communication
Misunderstanding
Humanity
The revision that would help expand the ideas in the excerpt
above would be adding more specifics about the sailors' beliefs about the
island.
To add, the Most Dangerous Game opens with a conversation
between two men—Whitney and
Rainsford.
A) Organic foods are a healthier option than conventional foods
