Props! Just answering so the first person can get the brain lies you promised.
But yes, props is correct!
Writer? Picture? Not sure....
The mistakes with the sentence is that there should be a semi colon after the word week and there should be the word should after “I think I”
here is the sentence correctly
I’m exhausted after so much work this week; I think I should stay home and go to bed early.
The 2nd one.
There's a certain slant of light,
On winter afternoons,
That oppresses, like the weight
Of cathedral tunes.