Amber, there was mosquito trapped in it, It had the Dino-DNA.
Answer:
It's very beautiful and passionate!
Tips:
-you put "once you get to the top" twice so try changing or deleting the second one.
-some common grammar mistakes (capitalize, correct spots for commas/periods, etc).
-try not to use "etc" in your writing.
-you spelled "realize" as relies
Other than those the story was good!! :)
In the last part 1 is "decreeing" and 2 is "endorsement" as you wrote.
