Submit your one or two-paragraph essay that evaluates the arguments presented within the article. Address these questions in you
r writing: Which argument was more convincing? Which article was better supported? How did the persuasive language affect the strength of the article? Article: the school garden debate
The argument against school gardens was more persuasive than the other school garden argument. The argument against school gardens was more persuasive because some people see school gardens as taking time away from classroom academics. Research also does not provide any proof that spending time in a school garden can lead to higher graduation rates. For supporters argument it states that “Nearly every research study for the past 100 years has shown that for students to perform well after graduation, schools must teach to the whole child and provide whole-school experiences.” Personally, I don’t think that school gardens will affect students after they graduate. This is how against supporters was more convincible than the other opponents.
Cut unnecessary things e.g 1.quick unnecessary conversations. Do only what really matters in time and try to be fast as you can to save your time for other important things