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No, I don't believe so. A thesis statement usually doesn't use the word "because" in it. But, as I've said (I've told this to the owner of the question just so no one gets confused in the comments), I'm not good at ELA mate.
Wait- thesis STATEMENT. Meaning it's the CONCLUSION of the paper, so, yeah NVM, it's right mate.
Keating is all about 'carpe diem', which means 'seize the day, go for it'. He encourages his students to live their lives to the fullest, the way they want to, and not to be restrained by anything. Having this in mind, Knox gathers the courage to go after the girlfriend of a football player, who was way out of his league.
Rainer Maria Rilke was one of the most known and respected poets of the <em>XIX century</em>.
For him the women symbolized many things, he saw them as <em>¨purer and humanistic¨</em> beings, with different positive aspects to remark and high light in an era where the women´s authority and figure were strongly debilitated.
This male chauvinist society behavior practically obliged the women to adapt to it, sometimes having to leave their ¨essence¨ in aside, and start to act in a more<em> ¨manly way¨</em>, without mentioning that normally the duties designed to women were considered not important or influent (housewife´s as an example).
Rilke´s was against this situation and highlighted the women's capacity to perform any task effectively, without having to copy or perform it the same way of a male, sustained their capacity to proceed properly before any situation, and basically saw the women as something unique, useful, necessary.
In different poems, he describes and highlights the women's qualities and ways to perform different duties in an effective and captivating way, having the capacity to influence completely their surroundings.
1. When the sun rises, the blue birds are singing, playing, and flying
2. After hibernating, the bear cubs emerging from their dens, playing with a stick, and looking for food.
3. The gardeners and I watering the daisies, tending to the roses, and trimming the trees.
4. The student brilliantly, cleverly, and believing when delivering his speech.
5. There are making thins I need to do today, like going the store, going to the gas station, and getting a haircut.
BTW i tried my best although i have never done anything like this so some may possibly be incorrect though some may right.
