This paragraph lacks sentence variety because the writer, started sentence after sentence the <em>same way</em>. didn't include structure with proper legth or that provides emphasis. <em>Prepositional phrase, adverbial clause, adverbs</em> (absolutely; naturally) or some<em> connective</em> (therefore; and; besides etc) are great help to <em>avoid monotony.</em>
Face the music means to face the troubles the world brings. To face a disagreement or something unpleasant.
Answer:
The speaker is using very informal words, being in a formal ceremony. This makes the excerpt of the speech extremely inappropriate.
Explanation:
Informal speeches should not be given at an award ceremony like the one presented in the question above. This type of ceremony requires a formal wording, embedded in a serious speech, without slang, without jargon and without words of a relaxed tone like the speech above, which presented a choice and words very inappropriate for the occasion, like the word "thanks," for example.
Hi! I’m not exactly sure of the topic you are referring to... but if it’s just about anything, you can make it sound interesting. I’ll give this my best shot. Here we go... stick with me:
Here are some key points to take whatever topic you are thinking of and make it interesting:
• enthusiasm- speak with enthusiasm about this topic. If you’re writing, add exclamation.
• language- use proper wording. For example: a salesman wouldn’t just say: “this product is cool.”
That isn’t persuasive or interesting about the product. That is simply stating his opinion. He could rather say: “this product is made for really everyone! It has complex features and works for all ages.” Therefore, I didn’t mention a product, but it definitely sounds better than just using the basic language.
• facts- when you are talking or even writing about something... you need facts. As I stated in the previous point, when the salesman stated his opinion, it wasn’t as persuasive or nearly as informative as the product with facts was. Knowing about your topic just as a salesman would know his product, will only benefit you in answering the question of how your topic would be interesting.
These were my key points I wanted to highlight and I believe that if you incorporate these points into your answer for the question you asked, it will be of success.
Happy studying! If you have further concerns, just post em in chat. I love to help.
~Brooke❤️
