Good job! I would recommend you tweek the first sentence, because its a run on sentence. Try divided up the sentence. Also, add a concluding sentence.
Answer:
See in the explanation.
Explanation:
1)Whenever leaders of terrorist organizations come to power, they enforce obedience and discipline by terrorizing their own members.
2)Some authors state that we are in transition to a planetary phase of civilization. However, the exact form and character of the global society is contested.
3)Americans respect law, and yet, The United States does experience crime.
4) Britain is a constitutional monarchy. In fact, there are six other constitutional monarchies in Europe.
5)His first case was successful. His second case was not as successful.
6)The essential elements of a case are not the same as those of previous recorded cases, If the judge is not bound to reach the same decision. (not 100% sure of this one though)
Answer:
Explanation:
I'm not sure what exactly you've learned but here's a potential hook:
In today's society, pressure is placed heavily on social media and how one looks or acts on it. Some users may believe that since no aspect of apps like Instagram or Twitter is necessarily face-to-face, no real harm can come of any mistakes made on these platforms. However, the dedication that so many people, young and old alike, place in these apps makes it very nearly impossible for any measure of one's self worth to be independent from the popularity they receive. It isn't the user's fault, these apps are designed to show us exactly what we want to see even if it lowers our self esteem in the process. On that note, bullying over social media has just as great an impact, if not a larger one, than bullying in school or elsewhere. So yes, the things that are posted by yourself on social media should always be treated as seriously as the things you say in everyday life.
This is very wordy and I actually think if you were to shorten parts of it and distribute them to other parts of the essay you may do better!
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-They are typically long documents and may have a table of contents.
