Answer:
I would change "Martin's and his family" to "Martin and his family's" and "his family" doesn't need to be in parentheses.
I would change the first commentary sectence to "Martin's Grandfather speaks in sioux which is his native language." and go into futher explanation on what he "knows". It's kind of a cliff hanger.
For the second commentary sentence, you should make sure to mention who's grandfather you're talking about if they are multiple in the story. Also I would change the sentence to "The grandfather exhibits his culture while wearing traditional clothing. The traditional clothing is typically worn by people of his tribe."
For the last commentary sentence, I would change it to "The quote states that the males in the family still follow traditions because it will eventually be passed down through generations.
Explanation:
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Answer with Explanation:
The author is trying to tell the readers that the High Place, which is the dwelling place of the white farmer, <em>James Esquire</em>, has a big gap with the poor, agricultural village of Ndotsheni.
The fields in the High Place are well-ploughed while those in Ndotsheni are over-grazed and signals poverty. So, this shows that people in the High Place have more power because they are more educated when it comes to the farming techniques. Thus, they can maintain such beautiful farms. On the contrary, those in Ndotsheni have lower power because people are uneducated. So, this means that they are not that literate about farming techniques.
<u>This also shows how unequal the top valley is from its lower portions, although they are all just connected to each other.</u>
