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From person to person ( by physical contact )
Answer:
Don't start sentences with how or but. it needs commas. and some of them sound like incomplete sentences/ thoughts. Attach some of the sentences together.
Explanation:
Hmmm just write about any cool things u did and that u really liked like any Christmas party’s or valentine things
These are called graphical components. Each graphical component has a function. Sometimes, of course, they are used just to get our attention.
