This sentence seems grammatically correct, but it’s wordy. if this is your sentence in an essay or something, i’d recommend splitting it into two. it could be something like “i do not dislike golf or tennis, and I actually enjoy swimming. Still, they can in no way replace the value of team sports.”
Answer:
Laura : Hi Alanee. How are you today?
Alanee : I am fine. How are you?
Laura : I am also fine. I just saw Jayden. He was going to swimming class.
Alanee : That is great. I am happy for Jayden as he is able to pursue his hobby as a career.
Laura : Yes even I am so happy for Him. What is your hobby?
Alanee : My hobby is Music. I play keyboards and a guitar whenever I get the time.
Laura : That is great.
Alanee : Yes. What is your hobby?
Laura: Oh my hobby is painting. I do oil painting. I just love how the colors form a beautiful piece of art.
Alanee : Oh wow. You need to show me some of your paintings soon.
Laura : Yes sure. Come by my house a 3.
Alanee : Okay sure. Bye for now.
Laura : Bye.
