Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
It would be easier if you provided an excerpt. Anyway I think that the right answer is C.. She is not the fastest runner in the race..
Answer:
b tremendously
Explanation:
it is tremendously as both mean a significant amount of something eg happening
No everyone is a superhero in there own special way. You don't need to have superpower to help someone. You just got to be yourself.
Hope this is the answer you were looking for!!!
Dear beloved brother,
I strongly advise you to reconsider leaving school to start a business, i suggest you get a degree before starting a business. Because you may run into problems that you (at your current intelligence level) may not be able to fix, and unless you have business strong partners, you’ll never succeed in your goal. So please, adhed my advice, and continue your school studies.
Yours lovingly, Big sister
(I hope this helps you ♥︎)
