I liked the first one very much and think it has much potential it was very entertaining and makes me want to see what happens next like if she will turn dark and how Peter Pan comes in hah, the second one was also very good but I feel as if it needs a bit more work in details like why she has to keep skipping homes or what is driving her on or even what might happen (like a suggestion but not a definite answer) in the future.
Hope this helps, haha it was so good that I am hoping you can actually help me out lol if ur interested look in the comments haha (I like ur ideas keep it up)
Jayce should not use either option. Option 1 is likely to be based so that paperbacks are overrepresented, while Option 2 is likely to be biased so that e-books are overrepresented.