Starter sentences for each paragraph and the information. If it’s accurate or not. Punctuation, capitalizing letters that need to be capitalized, and where you put the paragraph. Does it flow or are you going from one thing to another to the previous thing.
The amount of air decreases.
There was a fire on the mountains in September. The purpose is to personify the situation
Hey there Marquion!
Annah Senesh was a proponent of Zionism, which was a movement to establish a Jewish national homeland.
Hope this helps.
~Jurgem
The subordinate clause is "you must start researching now"
