First-person immediately puts the reader inside the narrator's head, which allows for an intimate portrayal of thoughts and emotions. You can effectively communicate how each moment feels—delivering sight, sound, smell, taste, and touch—through the prism of your narrator.
Well i know it was a good story that's for sure and I would help you but............ you won learn to do anything that way and all you need to do is read those chapters and write what happened in a shorter form so i don't really see what you need help on, your just being lazy and don't wanna read which is horrible.
Answer:
A."I had hoped," Bill said, "that I could play Captain Courageous in the play."
Explanation:
it is this one because the quotations are in the correct place, whereas B's quotations are only at the beginning and end, and i doubt that in the middle of his sentence, he said "Bill said". this is why the answer is A.