Answer: Please post your questions in legible English with proper spelling :)
Answer:
revising - in my opinion, check explaination.
Explanation:
if it is the best shape possible it is not a brainstorm and you can assume they have edited it. between revising or publishing. but they have written a draft so revising.
Mr. Wright was a cruel man, jealous because of how much attention his wife gave to the bird. He got a demeanor to kill the bird along with his wife's spirit, leaving himself feeling like a caged bird. ^~^
